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Winter Ghost

A withered red maple leaf, clings upon a frozen branch. An autumn remnant haunting, winter’s ice blue sky.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/18/2015 9:10:00 AM

Winters come and winters go but this work will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/15/2015 3:30:00 PM

a very elegantly written dodoitsu, beautiful, i can't imagine a better rendering of the form - congrats on your win!

Eve Roper

Date: 11/14/2015 11:33:00 PM

Beautiful, David, congratulations on your win!

Heather Ober

Date: 11/14/2015 11:23:00 AM

David, you created such a wonderful image with that "withered red maple leaf." I love the idea of a remnant of autumn haunting the winter sky. Big congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest!

Skat A

Date: 11/14/2015 7:46:00 AM

Hi David, Congratulations on your "Winter Dodoitsu Win." Luv SKAT

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/14/2015 5:38:00 AM

David, this a beauty, BIG CONGRATULATIONS! honored to share same spot with you!~Olive Eloisa =`)

Balveen Cheema

Date: 11/13/2015 9:22:00 PM

Congrats on your first placement!

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/13/2015 7:59:00 PM

I love the image you have painted with your words! Congrats on a well-deserved 1st place win! Love, Kim

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/13/2015 7:57:00 PM

Such an honor to share this spot with you David. You have mastered the short form !!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/13/2015 3:00:00 PM

Oh wow, such beauty in so few words. Congrats. BG

Jan Allison

Date: 11/13/2015 2:05:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful David - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 11/13/2015 1:18:00 PM

Very creative David; lovely imagery. A winner in jmy eyes! #7 Regards // paul