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Winter Fool

Winter's earliest fool, last leaves that cling to the tree; shall too someday fall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/4/2009 1:38:00 PM
I love this - like a lesson to the leaves who do not heed that winter is coming, and don't leave the tree!
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Date: 1/12/2009 4:51:00 PM
Nice haiku Judy and great use of imagery......Caramel
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Date: 1/11/2009 2:45:00 AM
Nice haiku Judy and great use of metaphors. Welcome to poetry soup...Raul
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Date: 1/10/2009 10:46:00 PM
Judy, Beautiful Haiku So much can be said in a well written Haiku : as this one is I find it interesting that how this is read could havea different meaning to different readers Superb YOUR POETRY Friend...HG
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Date: 1/6/2009 11:57:00 AM
Awesome. Yes, some of those leaves hang on for a long time. I sense a double meaning. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/5/2009 10:27:00 AM
Excellent word choices! A HAIKU with a heart... BRAVO Judy, and welcome to the Soup! Keith
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