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Winter Evening

Dropping sun paints the sky in red. Coldness is getting stronger instead. Returning birds are going home in hurry. But I'm still wandering around blurry. Soon later, darkness came and covered the town. Gentle frozen atmosphere is slowly falling down. Houses starts lightening their chambers. I am still out of numbers. Darkness is much suitable for my lonliness. Coldness is much pleasurable than human's corruptness. I feel that I'm protected by nature, Which lends me power to protect my future. Now, I'm wearing winter's evening. Which can warmly heal and guide me for praying. 13/Jan/2016 Fengleishanren.

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Date: 1/30/2016 2:17:00 PM
Nice Write Makoto, thanks for sharing.
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Makoto Ogino
Date: 1/30/2016 6:55:00 PM
Dear Pete, thank you for visiting. It's my pleasure you enjoyed it.
Date: 1/27/2016 1:28:00 PM
Nice poem. Thank you.
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Makoto Ogino
Date: 1/30/2016 6:52:00 PM
Dear Gholamreza, thank you for reading. I'm glad you liked it.

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