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Winter Dusk

The first crescent moon Following the setting sun With Saturn above In the clear December sky I send a wish to a star

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/30/2008 8:06:00 AM
I hope that wish comes true!! Well done, Jim!!~ Carrie
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Date: 12/30/2008 7:39:00 AM
Very well writen..I think the last line makes the poem. Hope your wish comes true.. BG
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Date: 12/30/2008 6:28:00 AM
Lovely. You made the image so clear and vivid. well-written....tc...Sara....
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