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First snow on tree tops, Canadian pristine . . . Nature's own beauty Of spirit supreme. Cascading waters Of crystal clear birth Instill serene pleasure From heaven to earth. As the lake mirrors mountains And deep azure sky, We commune together, My God and I. © Connie Marcum Wong

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/2/2015 9:22:00 AM
Love this, Connie. Yes, the beauty of the world He gave does transport us into his presence, and cause us to worship.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/2/2015 11:23:00 AM
Snow storms are another story, watching the news, I really feel for folks struck by the storms. But fresh fallen snow in sunny weather is heavenly. Thanks very much Cona. Blessings, Connie
Date: 1/21/2015 11:47:00 AM
Brought back memories, Connie. Canada is a beautiful country, and we were totally impressed with its beauty. An inspiring write, this.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/22/2015 5:55:00 PM
Thank you Cona. Canada does have wondrous beauty.
Date: 1/20/2015 4:37:00 AM
Truly divine, Connie.. Absolutely stunning, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/20/2015 1:47:00 PM
Thank you so much Arlene. I could sit here all day and read poetry from this talented group at Soup, but I have obligations. Hugs, Connie
Date: 1/19/2015 1:03:00 PM
Hi Connie! An enchanting poem -beautiful picturization of winter in Canada. A topnotcher. -Hamida
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Date: 1/13/2015 10:09:00 AM
Super 7 my friend. This write flows like a sweet dream. A testament to your spiritual alertness and poetic talent! Always pleasing to see the appreciation of God and the majestic beauty in the planet he created. Bravoooooooo!!!!!!!!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/17/2015 7:37:00 PM
Oh, thank you very much Robert. We all need to take care of our planet. Blessings, Connie
Date: 1/7/2015 7:54:00 AM
Lovely! The grandeur of nature does seem to make God feel closer.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/7/2015 9:19:00 PM
Thank you Monterey. Nature has become my church.
Date: 1/7/2015 7:37:00 AM
Beautiful flow and magnificent content, I am drawn to poems short and to the point.
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Date: 1/7/2015 9:17:00 PM
Me too. Thank you Jerry!
Date: 1/6/2015 8:43:00 AM
I especially like the last four lines. The image is great. Love, Dave
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/7/2015 9:16:00 PM
Thank you Daver. Hugs, Connie
Date: 1/5/2015 11:29:00 AM
I agree Tim. Thank you very much. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 1/4/2015 8:47:00 PM
There is a feeling of solitude and divinity in the winter, and you captured it very well. God's voice seems all the clearer away from the noises of the city.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/5/2015 11:30:00 AM
I agree Tim. Thank you very much. Blessings, Connie
Date: 1/1/2015 1:26:00 AM
Divine , connie, I love how you brought the communion with your God into the ending of it. short and sweet, just how I like them!!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/1/2015 2:34:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. I enjoy shorter poems too. They can be as memorable as longer poems. Hugs, Connie
Date: 12/31/2014 3:25:00 PM
A divine write...I'm sure that winter would be flattered.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/1/2015 2:36:00 AM
How sweet M.L. Thank you very much. Hugs, Connie
Date: 12/31/2014 3:24:00 PM
A beautiful little poem! Compact and concise...lovely!! :) john.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/1/2015 2:37:00 AM
Thank you John. I appreciate your kind comment. Aloha, Connie
Date: 12/31/2014 3:03:00 PM
this is simply stunning Connie a wonderful picture and stunning imagery:-) A 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/31/2014 2:36:00 PM
Beautiful poem...lovely imagery...inspired ending! Well done Connie; great poem to end the year with! All the best. // paul
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