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Winter Divinity

First snow on tree tops, Canadian pristine . . . Nature's own beauty Of spirit supreme. Cascading waters Of crystal clear birth Instill serene pleasure From heaven to earth. As the lake mirrors mountains And deep azure sky, We commune together, My God and I.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2015 5:16:00 PM

gosh, thought for sure I had commented to all your stuff, but I don't see my comment down here. WEll done, Connie. You made the top ten. BIG congrats. The message of this one is just beautiful.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/18/2015 11:31:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. Carissa has been ill with a cold she just gave me, so I have had more time to spend on poetry the past two days. Now if I can shake this cold...I haven't had a cold in a year and a half, which is a record for me, considering how many Carissa has had around me. Glad you like this poem. Hugs, Connie

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/18/2015 10:06:00 AM

A beautifully painted scene of Winter, Connie. Congrats on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/18/2015 4:18:00 PM

Thank you very much Sandra. I don't see white winters here but I enjoy the beauty of snow, just happy I don't have to shovel it like my sister in law who lives in Germany. Hugs, Connie

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/17/2015 10:24:00 PM

This is truly Connie-stic Connie,congrats on your win my friend...huggs

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/18/2015 12:26:00 AM

Thanks very much Kayod5. My church is in nature so this poem has meaning to me. Hugs, Connie

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/17/2015 9:04:00 PM

Nice imagery worded well, Connie, congrats on the win

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/17/2015 9:42:00 PM

Thank you very much Dr. Ram. Congratulations also on your other wins! Blessings, Connie

Jan Allison

Date: 1/17/2015 7:45:00 PM

Sublime imagery Connie I have such vivid images in my head - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/17/2015 7:58:00 PM

Thank you so much Jan. Yours was very impressive and so happy to see it at the top! Congrats! Hugs, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/17/2015 7:24:00 PM

Connie, Congratulations, on your awesome Winter Win:) I super love and enjoyed all poems, some more than others. Anyways, this was XOOL and had Winter written all over. Stop by my latest blog "Winter Rose" if you'd like. Have fun, reading any poem on my list. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/17/2015 7:56:00 PM

Thank you very much for my placement in your contest Linda. I searched for your blog but didn't see it. I will check again later. I am happy you liked my winter poem. Blessings, Connie

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 1/17/2015 7:03:00 PM

What a divine picture of winter you have painted, my friend! It is so lovely in imagery and flow! Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Pandita.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/4/2010 1:11:00 AM

Ahh, and so we do--nature sure has a way of reminding us of the magnificence God and your poem expresses that so well :) Have yet to experience Canada, hopefully one day I will--one of my goals there is to witness the northern lights ;)

The Fringe

Date: 1/19/2010 12:17:00 AM

Connie, your visualizations are wonderful. Keep it up. David

Heather Stanton

Date: 1/15/2010 11:47:00 AM

Very nice poem..I like it alot. Keep up the good work. My favorite part is '' We commune together, My God and I." That is exactly how i feel when i am outside, taking in the wonders of his creation.