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Winter Chill

A cold wind whispers in Autumns ear, sending chills As the trees shiver All their leaves decide to flee As the first snow starts falling

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/5/2014 11:56:00 AM
I came back here to tell you, that puzzle contest is very easy. You just take that scrambled word and unscramble it and then write about street lights being sure not to use the puzzle word in your poem but using synonyms of it. Just google scrambled words and type it in and you will see which word she is talking about!!
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Date: 10/24/2012 3:25:00 PM
this is really nice. A great visual as well. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/24/2012 3:21:00 PM
Contest results .... you won, congratulations. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/24/2012 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest Joseph. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/24/2012 12:02:00 AM
CONGRATS JOSEPH ON AN AMAZING WRITE AND WIN LUV .. WINTER IS UPON US HERE ALREADY ..
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Date: 10/23/2012 6:49:00 PM
JOSEPH, CONGRATULATIONS !!! :-) enjoyed your wonderful poem in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest... take care~xox~PD
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Date: 10/23/2012 5:29:00 PM
Great seasonal work..Enjoyed..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/17/2012 5:19:00 AM
nice images in this one....brrrr, i can feel the touch of winter's hands....great tanka!
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Date: 10/16/2012 7:35:00 AM
Good one! I like your personification of the leaves and Autumn :) good luck if it's for a contest
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Date: 10/15/2012 10:35:00 PM
Joseph, enjoyed your poem... always ~ pd
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Date: 10/15/2012 3:39:00 PM
Nicely done. Is it for any of the tanka contests? Sure hope so!
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Joseph May
Date: 10/15/2012 6:14:00 PM
thanks for the comments Andrea
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Joseph May
Date: 10/15/2012 6:13:00 PM
yes it' for the tanka (Season) contest
Date: 10/15/2012 5:17:00 AM
Nic poem....
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Joseph May
Date: 10/15/2012 6:14:00 PM
thanks Namratha

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