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winter burden

Heavy clumps of white fall
from the grey sky
landing on wooden limbs,
weighing them down
like dark skeletons
bent under the burden
of generations of sorrow

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  1. Date: 12/12/2009 4:00:00 PM
    Powerful words ... visual effects.. great writing, Krista, keep at it...blessings... luv... Linda-Marie, "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup...

  1. Date: 12/9/2009 3:11:00 PM
    The Christmas season seems to bring out such brilliant poetry from all the poets here at PoetrySoup making you all ~~~Poet Extraordinaires~~~. I thank you for sharing your poetry with us all through the year Krista. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/8/2009 6:57:00 PM
    nice thought with this work!!!!!! an interesting take on the stress that nature puts on itself or that we as people could also be struggling under generations of sorrow!

  1. Date: 12/8/2009 5:59:00 PM
    Such a profound, melancholy look at winter. Lovely poem! ~ Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 12/8/2009 4:10:00 PM
    Never thought of it that way, but it's a very original perspective of snow on the tree boughs. Nice work, Krista! Love, carolyn

  1. Date: 12/8/2009 3:16:00 PM
    Nicely descriptive write. I can just see the scene. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara