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Winter Blues

The Sun becomes A late riser as winter sets in And, it goes to bed early That’s SAD And, our mood swings Like a pendulum Causing depression What with Clouds And dense fog Spreading gloom All over the place? Only bright sunlight Can bring back Light into our lives And melt away The winter blues (January 9, 2018)

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Date: 9/26/2023 2:00:00 PM
Lovely, so nicely written!
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Vincent Van Ross
Date: 9/27/2023 10:53:00 PM
Thank you so much for your compliment Diane.
Date: 5/5/2018 10:11:00 PM
Belated congrats on your fine win with this poem, Vincent. Well done.
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Vincent Van Ross
Date: 5/6/2018 12:30:00 AM
Thanks very much for your compliments, Line Gauthier. But, If I have won something for this poem on this website, I am unaware of it. Please do enlighten me on this. Thanks again.
Date: 1/13/2018 5:03:00 PM
Winter blues beautifully expressed Vincent. Congratulations on your fine win.. ~Susan
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Vincent Van Ross
Date: 1/31/2018 10:30:00 PM
Thanks for you compliment, Susan.
Date: 1/13/2018 4:19:00 AM
I do believe that SAD is a real disorder...great poem, thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Vincent Van Ross
Date: 1/31/2018 10:30:00 PM
Thanks indeed, Laura Loo

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