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Winter Blues

Winter Blues a Children’s poem Snow on the ground and all around. Harsh wind on my back blowing me in every direction. It’s so cold outside. Across the road some children have built a snowman. He has no eyes, no nose, no mouth. The winter is the worst season for me but I was born in January one of the coldest winter months so what can I say. The coldest month just days after my birthday is in February. Temperatures get so low and snow turns to ice and black ice always scares me. This winter I haven’t fallen so thank the Lord for that!

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Date: 4/29/2017 5:03:00 PM
Ayesha, I know the feeling. I was raised in Iowa and Utah is not much better. I think you are in a worst place for snow than I am! This gets the point across!! I am so happy to be a summer baby!!
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Ayesha Karim
Date: 4/29/2017 8:29:00 PM
I wanted to say thank you. It feels like summer where I live in New Jersey. It felt like 70 or 80 degrees today. I am born in January but I love the Jersey Shore and summertime!
Date: 4/29/2017 5:36:00 AM
i can relate to this as i hate the winter months too! i always seem to go downhill in winter...there's some natural internal rhyme going on in this - me/january, low/snow - so maybe you can develop that further...thanks for reading me!
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Ayesha Karim
Date: 4/29/2017 9:37:00 AM
Oh thank you Charlotte. You are so welcome I'm glad you liked my poem Winter Blues. Thank you!
Date: 6/21/2016 3:02:00 AM
LOL! Thank the Lord for that indeed! Hey I like the part about being born in January best -good stuff! I'm just early January LOL! MC
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Ayesha Karim
Date: 6/21/2016 10:33:00 AM
Oh you are a winter baby too! Thanks for the comment.

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