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Winter Blues

It is freezing outside beyond the norm Right before me are some lights way up high They cast a blue glow throughout their dim form Fog is increasing gives opaque-blue sky I stand under a pole in zero temps Seeing the blue light emanating out It’s so cold out that many tend to limp Blueness of the night makes my face to pout I persevere onward through the blue light That encompasses the whole fog’s being Wind slithers through the air never in sight I have the winter blues, which I’m seeing
Russell Sivey Contest: Winter Blues Sponsor: Juli- Michelle 12/29/2013

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Date: 1/21/2014 9:18:00 AM
Interesting write on winter's blues and congrats on the win, Russell
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Date: 1/1/2014 1:43:00 PM
another great write here, my friend
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Date: 12/31/2013 2:27:00 AM
a very nice poem friend Russell. Wishing you and your family a very Happy New Year!! hugs ;)
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Date: 12/30/2013 4:22:00 PM
How beautifully you describe the winter blues !!
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Date: 12/30/2013 8:18:00 AM
Nice take on the theme of winter blues, Russell
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Date: 12/30/2013 5:46:00 AM
I think this must be for a contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Winter has reached the south..It has been cloudy or raining again here with the tempertatures dropping last night..It could cause the blues..Sara
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Date: 12/30/2013 1:00:00 AM
Wow! A very lovely poem of this topic my very dear friend, Russell! You described it excellently & very creatively well providing me a vicarious experience about the season. Thank you so much for sharing! Sorry for just dropping by now 'cuz I was super busy the past few weeks. I''ll try to visit more of your stellar writes more often soon. I'm now on short holiday ;))). Have a Happy & Prosperous New Year to you and your love ones/family! Wishing you the best! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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