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While powdered flakes gently spill from heaven Like embroidery of gold tassels kissing buds And hawthorns ,the frost twinkles and drifts Unto winter’s beautifully formed marquee, tangy the vapor of her skin wafting into nightfall’s’ interlude. Enthralled, I shudder at the rhythm Of her dance : icicles flitting in liquid Crystal taps on silver alleys... a movement glossed by the spades of eve’s lanterns: She is a mystery, a prayer, a holy angel That lays her sparkling white gown On pearled brocade sewn into fabric of snow… A winter’s luminescence casting an alchemy That my own fingers, in a pirouette, unfurls then coils into a solstice's hymn ‘Glory be, glory be.” 12/4/2016 Shadow Hamilton's A Winter Poem

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Date: 12/20/2016 8:28:00 PM
Very reassuring, Nette, in a seasonal sort of fashion - Really quite charming! All the very best...And have a wonderful Christmas! :) john
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Date: 12/7/2016 10:22:00 PM
Hi Nette, how lovely it would be just to spend one christmas with snow falling, it must be perfect, this is a lovely winter christmas poem, I am afraid I have to suffer the heat, I agree with Arthur it would make a lovely Christmas Carol. Take care........Vera
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Date: 12/6/2016 7:01:00 PM
When I read this I felt it could be made into a Christmas carol! So beautiful!
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Date: 12/5/2016 4:20:00 AM
Wow. WoW. WOW. We stand in the presence of greatness here. "tangy the vapor of her skin" ..... I am lightheaded. This poem is inclusive of so much beauty, needless to say, that I am seeing 7s, I am seeing Favorite, I am seeing that we see a vast amount of great poems, a lot of great poems, and then there are ones like this. There are spirits in poetry, the soul of it, elements, aspects, and this is simply a purity of it.
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Date: 12/4/2016 11:05:00 PM
" ... embroidery of gold tassels kissing buds ... " I love the imagery you use. Congratulations :)
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Date: 12/4/2016 10:15:00 PM
Like Merlin your poetry is magical
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Date: 12/4/2016 8:53:00 PM
Christmas is fast approaching! Congratulations on this magnificent poem and fine Win my dear friend, Nette! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Lory
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Date: 12/4/2016 7:18:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your wonderful win :) We wish you a Merry Christmas & a Happy New Year
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Date: 12/4/2016 6:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this lovely poem, Nette. Agnes
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Date: 12/4/2016 5:42:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/4/2016 3:42:00 PM
Wow! Great penned poem. Love the read.........A.M.
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Date: 12/4/2016 1:32:00 PM
WoW! Beautifully expressed. You draw quite lovely picture here my friend. Love the pic. God Bless and a seven from me. JB
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Date: 12/4/2016 12:39:00 PM
Just lovely, nette. I love the title. It's a wonderful prelude to your musical poem. Good luck:)
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Date: 12/4/2016 12:06:00 PM
A beautiful poetic poem x loved it x
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Date: 12/4/2016 11:53:00 AM
- Oh, Nette .... thanks .... B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/4/2016 10:23:00 AM
wow what amazing imagery Nette you wove the words in so beautifully - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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