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Silver haze of misty clouds swirling from chattering mouths Pursuing dancing snowflakes Just before they die! November 11, 2015

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Date: 11/19/2015 5:49:00 PM
Winters come and winters go but this work will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Rahy Hy
Date: 11/24/2015 1:25:00 PM
Thank you Sara. I feel truly blessed being showered by love and word of encouragement. Love, Rahy
Date: 11/14/2015 7:54:00 AM
Rahy, Congratulations on your "Winter Dodoitsu Win." Luv SKAT
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Date: 11/15/2015 9:49:00 PM
Thank you Skat. I didn't know that I had won till I started receiving notifications emails from the Poetrysoup. I was puzzled to see people were congratulating me. Any how, all I could say was that the monitor got blurry for couple of minutes. Thanks for all your encouragement! It means a lot to me. xoxo
Date: 11/13/2015 8:58:00 PM
A great image! Congrats on your win, Rahy! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/15/2015 9:50:00 PM
Thank you Kim! hugs xoxo
Date: 11/13/2015 3:00:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Rahy:-) hugs Jan xx
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Rahy Hy
Date: 11/15/2015 9:46:00 PM
Thanks Jan! I didn't expect the win at all. It's such a great honor. Hugs xoxo
Date: 11/12/2015 5:59:00 PM
You are painting with words. I love this poem
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Date: 11/13/2015 8:31:00 AM
Thank you so much Kate for your encouraging word. hugs xoxo
Date: 11/12/2015 3:48:00 PM
Very nice imagery in your winter poem, Rahy. Sandra
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Rahy Hy
Date: 11/13/2015 8:30:00 AM
Thank you Sandra! So nice of you to visit xoxo
Date: 11/11/2015 2:05:00 PM
wonderful imagery Rahy:-) hugs jan xx
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Rahy Hy
Date: 11/11/2015 2:26:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan. Wrote it for the Winter Dodoitsu contest :) xoxo

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