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Winter She glides on silver skates across the crystal water her heart a rose frozen in time cold and uncaring, eyes of no expression snowflakes fall from blue lips and fly away in frenzied winds from Indigo skies a porcelain moon shines down on sugar roofs as chimney smoke writhes and slithers like a magical genie escaping into thin air

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/4/2015 12:05:00 AM
such a winter queen, floating freely!
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Date: 1/15/2015 7:13:00 PM
Valerie, very nicely done, the "porcelain moon...on the sugar roofs" WHAT A VISUAL!!
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Valerie Bellefleur
Date: 1/16/2015 8:33:00 AM
thank you John for your comment..
Date: 1/15/2015 4:10:00 PM
wonderful imagery beautiful personification:-) A 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx
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