Winter

WINTER old folks warmly dressed out with rakes and hoes try to inveigle a new spring Dave Austin

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 1/19/2015 10:58:00 PM

A fantastic read is your piece! ;-) I started writing tanka only recently.

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/19/2015 12:31:00 PM

Inveigling Daver..? Enjoyed this and had to comment..'

Monterey Sirak

Date: 12/24/2014 6:52:00 AM

Have a very merry Christmas, Daver.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/22/2014 11:29:00 PM

Love this one, DAver, and that is funny what you said about the green thing in the santa's drink. I too thought of mary jane!!

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 12/21/2014 12:54:00 PM

Oh Merry Christmas to you, Daver!! I am writing a new poem about the fog? Not foggy here today; were're supposed to have a snow blast on Christmas day.:( Going to need many "rakes and hoes" to dig out Spring. Oh, someone said I use a lot of commas,,,I think they're cute, like pollywogs waiting to turn into frogs. Bong, bounce, more bongs and bounces. Keep well and stay warm! Love you, Mikki