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Winnie's Builders Bum

Uniformed camels Backpacks in the place of humps Looking left then right The gates inviting the herd Ready for a new school day Mr Jones's car Yet again won't bloody start It revs and splutters Bursts into life and then flames He works from home anyway Winnie's rose garden where the birds come for a bathe and shelter from rain There she goes, mowing again She needs a belt for those pants..... Jodie Williams for Francine's The View contest 17th Sept 2011

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Date: 9/21/2011 2:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of Francine "The View" Jodie. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/19/2011 3:44:00 AM
sis, i just love this one , great description, christmas is coming soon get her a belt will you ha ha ....congrats on your fantastic win..David
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Date: 9/18/2011 11:02:00 PM
CONGRATS JODIE ON ANOTHER AMAZING WIN WITH LOVELY LINES OF TANKA LUV..
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Date: 9/18/2011 10:56:00 PM
loved the humor in this entry, congrats Jodie on your 7th place win
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Date: 9/17/2011 3:05:00 PM
how picturesque, jodie... greeat stuff for the contest with best wishes..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/17/2011 10:18:00 AM
Well Jodie, this is superb love the detail, good luck. Harry
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Date: 9/17/2011 10:11:00 AM
Oh, I loved this. Tony
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