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Wings of Fire

A blue-eyed moon peeks from under smoky clouds to spy the wonder of fireflies. As shallow ponds reflect each spark, a lone wolf’s eyes shine in the dark from firebush. Blazing wings rise from wintry sleep a stunning summer scene in leaps of wildfire.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/28/2014 10:06:00 AM
Gorgeous, Rhonda...i love your work!! Congratulations.
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Date: 11/27/2014 8:37:00 PM
congratulations on your much deserved win
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Date: 11/27/2014 9:47:00 AM
It has a very natural theme with the lone wolf and the summer fire. congrats on your win with this stunning poem.
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Date: 11/26/2014 8:58:00 PM
Hi Rhonda, Great language usage with brilliant images. Wonderful poem. Congratulations on a noble, well earned win. Take care. Happy Thanksgiving. Earl
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Date: 11/26/2014 6:11:00 AM
vivid display of raw images worthy of laurels, Rhonda..thanks for gracing my contest and big congrats on your glory- win!
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Date: 11/26/2014 2:54:00 AM
Love Rhonda we both chose fire. Congrats . "lone wolf’s eyes shine in the dark" wow this haunted me all along. take care. God bless....rajat
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Date: 11/26/2014 12:40:00 AM
Rhonda, this is outstanding and my favorite. I love the exciting wildness of it! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/25/2014 7:59:00 PM
Congrats on your win Rhonda
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Date: 11/25/2014 7:05:00 PM
Oh this ones my fav ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/25/2014 6:10:00 PM
Hi Rhonda, stopping back to congratulate you on your deserving win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/25/2014 5:29:00 PM
God I love your writing Rhonda. Your imagery, your combination of words all so original, not a cliche anywhere. WOW! Congratulations on your win. I am going to fav this one.
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Date: 11/25/2014 5:20:00 PM
Very well penned Rhonda. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/25/2014 4:12:00 PM
wonderful! Congrats..You are so talented. BG
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Date: 11/25/2014 2:56:00 PM
You painted a wonderful picture Rhonda - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/22/2014 3:34:00 PM
Rhonda, such great imagery in your poem! It flows so beautifully. Good luck in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/19/2014 11:24:00 AM
thumbs up rhonda really very beautifully painted piece love how this drew for me
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Date: 11/17/2014 4:57:00 PM
Your first line grabbed my imagination and was delighted to experience the fire earth and wind from above! Nicely done
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Date: 11/17/2014 4:11:00 PM
Each verse has a Haiku feel to it. I think Nette will really like this poem. good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/17/2014 12:50:00 PM
I have fallen in life with this, fantastic imagery, visions of winter dragons. I LOVE this write, you truly have gifts, my dear. xoxo
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Date: 11/17/2014 11:29:00 AM
Very well written, I like this piece.
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