Get Your Premium Membership

Wings of Change

Remembering when Perched high above on rocky crags Cliffs weathered by times handprints I saw far and wide to distant shores Tendrils of desire radiating outwards Riding the briny mist Being carried by the breath of the ocean, my constant companion Hearing the distant voices, the silent tears The bursts of passion ~ love and loss I ride the wings of hope and change Towards the beckoning landscape of Creation, mystery, and nuance A vibration fills the air The quiet chanting of our ancient brothers and sisters Their words floating in effervescent bubbles Tinged with melodies so clear We are one ~ We are here Let us bathe you in light Let us heal your wounds Let us give you hope We are all mirrors of one another We share one breath We are connected like the mycelium under the ground Our journey is peaceful Come to us with your pain, your heartache, Your fear and your loss We are here to listen Our ears and hearts are open You have come to a safe sanctuary to reveal your secrets Your darkness, your desires, and your bliss Without judgement This is a time of renewal Tiny green hummingbird lays lifeless on the ground Surrounded by new life Glittering musical notes sound as Pink butterflies gather Gentle wind of wings bringing change Warm rain falls as we make our way Through the kaleidoscopes of turquoise, teal, lime and chartreuse Sunlight reflections Moss, furry seedlings, and ferns Intertwine dancing in the shafts of light A steady illuminated procession Sweat running down our bodies We are a train of humanity pushing forward Through the dense moist jungle Coming upon a clearing to witness The newborn baby girl wrapped in velvet greenery A majestic glowing beacon shining her light On all of us Howling The chatter of monkeys as they scramble down limbs to join us We feel her heartbeat We meld into one another seamlessly Swaying gently in unison To honor, rejoice and celebrate Receiving the gift of what it is to be human Slowly the child is lifted into the air Aloft on fingertips of joy The Circle of Life begins And we return to the simple act Of loving and giving to one another Into eternity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Date: 10/21/2022 11:14:00 AM
Loved the imagery. Your thoughts esp. the last standing is amazing... And yeah, congratulations! Cheers
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 10/30/2022 7:00:00 AM
Thank you dear Paghunda ! Blessings to you, Susan :)
Date: 5/27/2022 11:12:00 AM
Susan, through your lyrical fountain of images, sights, and emotions you distill all into our most basic ministry - to love and give to one another coaxing us "into eternity" - The Circle of Life." There is so much to reflect on I know I will read it many times and still have more inspiration to discover. Thank you for this beautiful gift! It is a blessing. Blessings to you!
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 5/27/2022 10:21:00 PM
Sam , Thank you ! Humbled and honored by your visit and comments. Blessings to you. Susan :)
Date: 5/21/2022 12:01:00 PM
I read your last stanza which much wonder and amazement, - I love it, so creatively and poetically crafted, sums up who and what we are, as we return to the basics in life, - "of loving and giving to one another into eternity" Intense write dear Susan. Blessings, Jennifer.
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 5/27/2022 10:20:00 PM
Dear Jennifer, Blessing to you my friend .in gratitude for your participation and comments. Big hugs, Susan :)
Date: 5/5/2022 4:24:00 AM
This is a fantastic piece of writing! Your final stanza is just stunning! Susan, you've caught a really poignant moment in time in your poem. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this wonderful and majestic poem written with your invigorating ink while you surfed the ethereal wings of transformation and optimism.
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 5/6/2022 9:30:00 AM
Dear Sotto, I am humbled by your comments. I am thrilled my poem moved you . Thank you for riding this wave of life with me . Blessings to you , Susan :)
Date: 4/23/2022 2:44:00 AM
Lot of thought, S. Enjoyed this.
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 4/25/2022 8:02:00 PM
Thank you for your visit Andrew . Happy you enjoyed it ! Susan :)
Date: 4/7/2022 4:02:00 AM
I saw one congrats in there so it must be a winner in a contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it kept me wondering what would be next. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 4/8/2022 6:47:00 AM
Hi Sara . Happy for your visit . Thank you for your comments. Sending all good wishes! Susan :)
Date: 4/6/2022 7:45:00 AM
This is a splendid write! Your last stanza is outstanding! You captured a very tender moment of life. Hats off to you!! A fav for me.
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 4/8/2022 6:47:00 AM
Hi JCB ! Thank you for your visit . Honored by your comments and Fav ! So happy my poem moved you . All the best, Susan :)
Date: 3/31/2022 10:34:00 PM
You have prodded me to join you in an amazing journey of oneness when a new order is born, when dualities are ironed and eased. Let us wake into a new world- resurgent and new. You are indeed a gifted writer, Susan !
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 4/2/2022 10:27:00 AM
Dear Valsa , Your comments come from you beautiful heart and soul . Thank you for your wonderful words . Hugs and blessings, Susan :)
Date: 3/30/2022 4:35:00 PM
A belated congratulations, Susan, on your POTD. This is truly a magnus opus! Light and Joy, Gershon
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 3/31/2022 1:02:00 PM
Hi Gershon , Humbled by your comments. Thank you thank you . Light and joy right back to you ! Susan :)
Date: 3/29/2022 11:19:00 PM
Wow i'm late to this wonderous gem of poetry, what a journey i've uncounted here, in front of me. Quite speechless to be honest, certainly a poem for today.
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 3/31/2022 1:02:00 PM
Hi Harry ! So happy to have you visit ! In gratitude for you kind words. I am thrilled my poem moved you . Big hugs . Hope you are well . Susan :)
Date: 3/28/2022 7:29:00 AM
I know I commented on your poem but you deserve the best. Thanks for reading my poem.
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 3/29/2022 7:55:00 AM
Dearest Victor, Thank you my friend for your return visit. Humbled and in gratitude. Susan :)
Date: 3/27/2022 10:23:00 AM
Revisiting to add to my faves, so I can read this poem many more times. Huge congrats on POTD. Love and blessings, Dear Susan ~ Mala
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 3/27/2022 8:02:00 PM
Dearest Mala , What a gift to see you back . I am honored you put this poem into your faves! Big hugs to you . Looking forward to reading your next poem ! Blessings, Susan :)
Date: 3/23/2022 9:53:00 PM
Susan, you have sometimes thanked your readers for taking the journey with you, but I feel it should be us thanking you for creating these journeys of scintillating adventure, communing with glorious nature, finding oneness with humanity, coexisting in harmony with the universe, singing together with all fellow inhabitants of this space we call Earth, and learning how to appreciate and take care of her as she gives so much to us. Each breathtaking poem of yours is like taking a long walk with a dear friend through a magical forest. Going in my faves. Congrats for a truly deserved POTD honor, and on behalf of many: thank YOU. Light and peace ~ John
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 3/24/2022 7:17:00 PM
Dear John, So very happy reading your words. A smile on my face and a pang in my heart. I am humbled by all of your comments. I love the image of taking a long walk through the forest with a dear friend. So very tranquil...enveloping the soul in comfort. Thank you thank you. Your presence is so appreciated and you're surrender to the journey inspired. Sending peace, love and light right back to you and yours. in gratitude, Susan :)
Date: 3/23/2022 10:48:00 AM
Dearest Susan, I join with you on this procession of life, my heart lifted into the air with yours, my soul rejoicing and celebrating the Circle of Life with yours. I'm enthralled to take this journey with you so full of color, vibrancy, hope, joy, life, death and most of all, an all encompassing love. Your peace-loving pen spills with natural beauty and oneness reflective of you and your spirit. I am grateful for you and your precious words of enticing imagery, my sweet poetry sister. "The bursts of passion ~ love and loss" reaches me very deeply. So exquisite is this piece! Belated congratulations for POTD honors, so richly deserved. Warmest wishes, love and big hugs to you.. ~Susan
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 3/24/2022 7:09:00 PM
Dearest Susan, In humble gratitude reading your passionate words so full of love. I am honored to have your presence in my life and as part of my artistic journey of the soul. Yes we are all one. So many of us have had a mutual experiences and shared consciousness. We feel each others pain, loss and joy. We vibrate together and we are connected by the energetic loving waves amongst us. Thank you my dear friend for all that you are and all that you give to so many. Sending sunlight wishes to you ~ smiles and warmth and renewal. Love and hugs, Susan :)
Date: 3/22/2022 9:46:00 PM
fantastic writing here. Such imagery and I see it got Potd too? Wow, Congrats to you.
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 3/23/2022 7:05:00 AM
Thank you dear Andrea ! Big hugs , Susan :)
Date: 3/22/2022 8:19:00 AM
Dear Susan, your magnificent poem speaks to the heart and soul of all of us. This was such a pleasure to read and a treasure to keep in my faves. Beyond beautiful! Thank you for this poetic gift. Congratulations on POTD! It is so deserving of the honor. Blessings xxoo
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 3/22/2022 12:58:00 PM
Dearest Connie, Your presence is a gift here . Humbled by your heartfelt comments. I am so happy that this touched your soul. I send my love and blessings to you my friend. Hugs, Susan :)
Date: 3/21/2022 6:10:00 PM
(Cliffs *are* weathered by times hand-prints) There is so much truth in this statement. This thought whispers truth to each one of us as well. It's a wonderful feeling when you "ride the wings of hope and change." Embracing the magic. Your words caress softly around me and my heart. This is beautiful in every way. Congratulations Susan, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 3/22/2022 12:56:00 PM
Dear Brandy , Your presence and you kind insightful words are so welcome here. Thank you for your gracious comments. I am so happy we could take this journey together. Hugs to you , Susan :)
Date: 3/21/2022 4:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD honour, Dear Susan. There are so many beautiful lines, and images, I especially liked this one - "Warm rain falls as we make our way Through the kaleidoscopes of turquoise, teal, lime and chartreuse.." Best wishes for a rich poetic journey ~ Mala
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 3/21/2022 5:02:00 PM
Dear Mala, Thank you for your visit and gracious comments. I appreciate you. I am so happy we could journey together with this poem. Sending all good wishes and hugs to you !Susan :)
Date: 3/21/2022 4:26:00 PM
Dear Poetry Soup Friends. I am so very thankful for your presence on my journey of Poetry, Art and Life. Thank you thank you for your gracious comments and participation. I have been so inspired by all of your poetry and your kindness and remarks. Onward to all of us !! Hugs and all best wishes , Susan :)
Login to Reply
Leffanta Avatar
Rico Leffanta
Date: 3/22/2022 11:36:00 AM
Hugging you would be a REAL pleasure! Aloha 'oe!
Date: 3/21/2022 2:45:00 PM
Wow so many wonderful lines in your poem..such a great choice for potd...
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 3/21/2022 5:00:00 PM
Dear Silent One, Your poems speak volumes and are so poignant. I have enjoyed reading them. Thank you for your visit and comments. I am grateful for your presence here. Susan :)
One Avatar
Silent One
Date: 3/21/2022 2:45:00 PM
Congratulations
Date: 3/21/2022 1:55:00 PM
Susan, beautiful and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~Constance
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 3/21/2022 4:58:00 PM
Dear Constance, thank you for your visit and comments and congratulations. I appreciate it. Susan :)
Date: 3/21/2022 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations Susan, on the POTD, really great pen with insightful imagery too. Have a great day, Gordon
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 3/21/2022 4:57:00 PM
Thank you dear Gordon. I am grateful to have your presence and comments. Wishing you a beautiful week ahead! Susan :)
Date: 3/21/2022 11:33:00 AM
What a rich life you have lived! Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD! Aloha 'oe!
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 3/21/2022 4:56:00 PM
Dear Rico, So many memories . So many stories and tales and bliss and sorrow. It is all part of the journey. Thank you for all you are . Always in gratitude, Love, Susan :)
Date: 3/21/2022 10:32:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this exquisite and sublime write through your inspiring ink as you rode the wings of hope and change... Your usage of words for creating images are awesome.. "tendrils of desire"... loved it. The newborn baby girl in velvet greenery, shining her light on all of us symbolizes 'Hope'. I so much loved this stanza: "Warm rain falls as we make our way...... dancing in the shafts of light".... what an imagery... this stanza alone proves you are a great artist... Hearty congratulations on your well deserved POTD honor my sweet friend... Big hugs... ~ Ani
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 3/21/2022 4:55:00 PM
Dear Ani, Thank you my friend. Your light is such a lovely presence. I am grateful for your participation and comments and insight. I am so happy you could take this journey with me. Thank you for your graciousness. I send you all good thoughts and blessings and hugs. All the best, Love me xx Susan :)
Date: 3/21/2022 9:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A beautiful write/message. Have a blessed day/week..................
Login to Reply
Lawrence Avatar
Susan Lawrence
Date: 3/21/2022 4:52:00 PM
Hi dear Paula, Thank you ! I have been enjoying your poems. Blessings to you, Susan :)
12

Book: Shattered Sighs