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Below is the poem entitled Wings which was written by poet Jessica Kuilan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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What I wouldn’t give to feel free...
Gliding along with the ocean breeze
...God how great would that’d be...

Away from the heavens...
Away from hell...
Why can’t it just be...

Alone with the wind
and without any thoughts...
where is this freedom I seek?

If only my wings would let me fly free
I would finally be able to breath
With the gusts of the wind and the sounds of the sea...

God what a great feeling that would be...
Just with that one moment above the sea...
I could come alive again...perhaps even breathe...

If only my wings would break free
From the stress of living a life away from the sea
...what a life that would be...

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  1. Date: 7/3/2013 8:16:00 PM
    Beautiful description of free wings. I enjoyed this poem, Jessica. My name is Jiril Clemons, check out some of my poems, you might find one you like.

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 9:51:00 PM
    My favorite so far <3

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 2:30:00 PM
    Not bad at all. I think it's something that we can all relate too. I live far away from the sea, but I know what it's like to be by the coast walking endless miles on the beach... it's quite serene!