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Wingless Angel

Wingless Angel Wingless Angel Earliest morning, twilight blend Near the horizon, silver pretend. The breeze is gentle, weather delight. Happy together, wishful, and bright Who else is here ready to fly? Need and greed are reasons to cry. Lonely, I am, driven by pain; nowhere to go, nothing to gain. Where is this place, an orbiting ball? It could be a prison with no doors and wall. I wish to fly higher than the sky. Without any wings, I would rather die. Haloo 5/2014

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/15/2017 9:35:00 AM

Sooner or later you'll fly when your soul reaches for the sky.., for now, you are an angel in waiting.., earning your wings... A beautiful write of mortal heartache Pashang. I see it won a contest - a belated congratulations. Your poem is deep, evocative, thought-provoking and palpable with pain. Soulful write!

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/16/2017 9:26:00 AM

Thanks Susan for your understanding....Always,

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/10/2016 3:56:00 PM

Hi Pashang, firstly i give my belated Congratulations on your win in the contest. There is always such deep emotion in what you write Pashang. Your words touch the heart and mind so deeply. That is your gift. A top rating, seven, for this write my friend....Vlad.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/10/2016 6:06:00 PM

Thanks Vlad, you are so nice and talented... I don't remember this contest, but thanks anyway.. Pashang