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Wine Country

In a vehicle, once more this month. Though not going as far as the palm trees, my stomach’s lurching left and right. The baby’s alright! He coos from time to time as we weave through lovely soil and vines. My cousin with his bawdy jokes, his wife with eyes like gears, up to the roof of the party van. The pulley of emotions in full range, the laughter and tunes fogging up the window panes. We’ve been here before, though time changes the “whos.” Dad’s still with us and enjoying beers and grins with the menfolk. Still, I find I stick by his side. This has been so, since Mom died. There is a rhythm and flow to this. We head up into the mountains of Georgia. I can’t tell you where we’ve been except for the one sign I see out the window. It says “White County” and “Courthouse Museum.” That two-tone image, a bit scary! Bumping along, drinking soda; and polka, the choice of my Dyngus Day-relations. Holding onto my tummy, closing my eyes on this first leg. The sight of vines, pruned and neat. Almost to our first stop. Let me out…let me out. Makes us want to shout. The driver of the vehicle is not a stranger. My brother-in-law’s a limo driver. Picks up some big names, but of that part of his life, we can’t participate…who cares. We hear a few stories. How sweet he is to drive us to wine country. Aren’t we the lucky ones. Bulbs still flash to take numerous pics and yes, many get posted, but the paparazzi cares not to follow us. The loveliness of the day, like bulbous and sweet grapes, picked and prepared to meet our sips, to toast our happiness. This outside venue takes us away on a mini vacation, a treasure to share with our relations. Snack trays arrive along with red and white. This mini jar of honey, divine, tastes sweet as sugar. We have crackers, meats, even a green-tinted cheese, could be coniferous… All those sparkling glasses like a family circle, filled, sipped. Later, we do it again, at another vineyard, sitting in wooden chairs next to a woodpile. It is lovely there, as well. All in all, we were out for nearly twelve hours, and there was more, much more time spent. Thankfulness for this family outing. A sweet memory that will last.

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Date: 4/26/2024 5:24:00 PM
Love your memory closet you open up <3 xx if I was related to you I would probably always ask for a new story, new poem, new something, lol
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Date: 4/24/2024 10:15:00 AM
Hey Kim, your poem invites the reader on a heartfelt journey through a family outing, evoking a sense of warmth and connection that resonates long after the day is over. It is a celebration of family, love, and the simple joys of spending time together, leaving behind a sweet memory that lingers like the taste of honey on the tongue
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Date: 4/23/2024 7:53:00 AM
a wonderful experience poet Kim, in france we call that, "la route des vins", i had some adventure with two friends in the Napa Valley in California, the wine was tasty, with no abuse for sure, thanks for the refreshing and delicious poem
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/23/2024 2:13:00 PM
I appreciate you, Yann! I took 3 years of french in high school, which was eons ago.
Date: 4/22/2024 8:49:00 AM
what a wonderful poem about a memorable family time. Delightful imagery might for a captivating read and pleasant story-reading experience. I especially liked this line for its eloquent descriptive words: The loveliness of the day, like bulbous and sweet grapes, picked and prepared to meet our sips, to toast our happiness. Thanks for sharing & have a pleasant day, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/22/2024 11:36:00 AM
Thank you for reading and letting me know what your favorite part was. Have a blessed day!
Date: 4/22/2024 7:15:00 AM
A good story that car sickness, luckily, did not ruin. Travel with family can be a uniting event
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/22/2024 11:36:00 AM
Thankfully it didn’t last long and did not return. Hugs :)

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