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Windshield Wipers

Most of them go side to side In rhythm and together, To keep our visibility In wet or wintry weather. But some go from the corners in And meet right in the middle, Like bows quick-drawn across the strings Of cello, bass or fiddle. In “Wheels on the Bus,” the sound they make Is “swish swish swish,” although Reality must disagree - But that’s the way things go. No matter, they are useful tools When driving in the rain. Without their help, a rainy road trip Sure would be insane!

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Date: 6/4/2015 11:10:00 PM
Well, you certainly have heralded wind shield wipers. And respectively so. Without them, we only drive when it's dry. Hmmm. :)
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Date: 6/1/2015 8:49:00 AM
A cute and entertaining poem, Ilene. Some wipers do a lot of talking as well while going swishy swish...at least that's how I imagine them. Sometimes it pours and pours, and they get stuck for words:) // paul
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Date: 6/1/2015 7:12:00 AM
scary it would be without them, enjoyed your write ~Luv S.K.A.T.
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Date: 6/1/2015 12:00:00 AM
ilene only you could write something as perfect as that, love it mind you I have forgotton what they are for as we don't have that much rain here, love to read your poems, take care my friend..................Vera..........
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Date: 5/31/2015 11:41:00 PM
Have been using them way to often here.....now I'm going to be singing that nursery rhyme
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Date: 5/31/2015 9:10:00 PM
Very clever manipulation of rhythm, and PERFECTION in the rhyme dept., as usual! Not only do you achieve excellence with your poetic technique, you always leave us with a message to ponder. Superb my dear! Best wishes, Keith
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