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~~ I struggle always with my memories, The long ago past is forever lurking; In a moment I am whispered back, And the pages of my life are fluttering. Fluttering in the misty winds of time, To where the joyful and painful burn; O but this is the key to who I am, And each memory has its own turn. Turn back the pages of my journey, I am a little girl playing and dreaming; O but to stay frozen in this memory, And to not ever know the pain of weeping. Weeping has always been my companion, I so often stand in a place of sorrows; Past the ornate gate and winding road, And the past shall haunt all my tomorrows. ______________________ August 16, 2014 Poetry/Quatrain/Winds of Time Copyright Protected, ID 08-591-463-16 All Rights Reserved, 2014, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, Any Poem #8, sponsor, Skat, Judged 08/2014 Third Place _________________________ Submitted to the Standard contest, Where Frozen Embers Burn, sponsor Gail Doyle, 2014 8th place

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Date: 7/11/2015 7:19:00 AM
Just read your winds of time congrats I love it!
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Date: 7/11/2015 2:50:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win BW,, lovely write my dear!
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Date: 7/11/2015 1:52:00 AM
Broken, Congrats on your Any Old Poem #8 win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/10/2015 6:34:00 PM
I really like this Constance. I love how you use the last word of the stanza as the first word of the next. I think it gives that word more meaning and carries your thought with it...congratulations Tim
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Date: 7/10/2015 1:26:00 PM
So sad and beautiful... congrats on your win
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Date: 7/10/2015 1:14:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations, on your awesome win. SKAT
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Date: 9/12/2014 4:25:00 AM
wow truly excellent piece grasping beautifully penned piece
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Constance La France
Date: 9/12/2014 4:53:00 PM
Thank you so much Liam ~~
Date: 8/29/2014 5:47:00 AM
Moving emotions and sentiments nicely penned, Constance
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Date: 8/30/2014 8:58:00 AM
Thanks so much Dr. Ram for your forever support ~~
Date: 8/28/2014 4:05:00 PM
There is such a deep sadness in your poem. It's sad to think of you "fluttering in the misty winds of time." I have missed you and hope you are doing well. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Constance La France
Date: 8/30/2014 9:01:00 AM
Thanks Carolyn, yes my poetry does have a sadness to it and I am forever haunted by the past, it is really so good to hear from you, I am doing well thanks and I hope you are also ~~
Date: 8/28/2014 3:38:00 PM
Congrats...this winning placement does not surprise me.
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Constance La France
Date: 8/30/2014 9:01:00 AM
O thanks Faye, your support means a lot to me ~~
Date: 8/25/2014 9:35:00 AM
Excellent take on this topic; beautiful phrases all through; to me it is a sure winner. gl just the same. // paul
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Constance La France
Date: 8/27/2014 2:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Paul for your support of my poetry ~~
Date: 8/24/2014 3:02:00 PM
This is a jewel . A superb write that shows profound sadness. BBBravoooooo!!!!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/24/2014 3:51:00 PM
Thanks so much Robert, I am so happy you came to my poems and read this write, your support is appreciated ~~
Date: 8/17/2014 1:31:00 AM
Wonderful write Broken wings, sad although ! Good luck to u!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/18/2014 7:33:00 PM
Thank you so much Upma, I do sometimes write such sad words~~
Date: 8/16/2014 5:52:00 PM
such a sad but beautiful write here, my friend. hope you and the kitties are having a great weekend x
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Constance La France
Date: 8/18/2014 7:35:00 PM
TU Jack, you know me always with the sad, me and the kitties are hanging in, each day is a gift ~~
Date: 8/16/2014 5:17:00 PM
Beautiful, Broken Wings. "I so often stand in place of sorrows." So poignant.
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Constance La France
Date: 8/16/2014 5:32:00 PM
Thanks Faye for your wonderful comment ~~

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