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Winds are made from gases that live naturally here on earth 

Pampero you rush across the pampa's of Argentina blowing fast and strong bending all before you. Mighty and powerful you make your presence known as you travel o'er the pampas in triumphant passage. Ah Simoom you shift around the sand dunes sucking up all moisture as you journey the Sahara, creating vast clouds of blinding sand. Stinging sands that cut like knives tearing at clothes. Tramontane you blow so cold as you traverse the Alps bringing with you freezing ice and snow. And flick over to the Pyrenees where you dance in delight as you blow hard and strong whipping up snow. Wreckhouse you blow down the slopes of the Range mountains of Newfoundland. Cleansing and refreshing as you bring life giving rains to their slopes. Vibrant greens left by your path as you go on to who knows quite where Fremantle Doctor you are an afternoon sea breeze coming in from the Indian Ocean you bring welcome coolness across Perth with a salty tang, but only in the summer months do you work your charms. Plough winds breezing along in straight furrows preceding thunderstorms forming clusters of rain. No deviation in your path straight as a arrow you bring lightning flashes that lit the skies. Calima the dread of housewives as you bring dust laden clouds to the shores of the Canary Islands, coming south to southeasterly carried by the Saharan air layer. The sooner gone the better. Abrosolhos with your frequent squalls that traverse in the months of May through to August known in Portuguese as open eyes you flow between Cabo de San Tome and Cabo Frio causing chaos. written 2014 contest Wind sponsor Skat

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Date: 9/1/2015 1:05:00 AM
Congrats on your superb winning write Shadow! Loved the unique take on this!
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Date: 8/30/2015 11:07:00 PM
Shadow, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my WIND contest. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 11/25/2014 3:10:00 PM
very educational and interesting write, my friend
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Date: 11/25/2014 3:55:00 PM
ty Jack appreciated hugs
Date: 11/25/2014 12:10:00 PM
A nice composition based on anthropomorphism of various named winds: an educational narrative of their impact on the lands they inhabit. I found this a refreshing read and was swept from country to country, as the winds carried me. (For info, winds (moving air) are born of pressure differences and pampas has no possessive inverted comma.)
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Date: 11/25/2014 3:57:00 PM
ty Perry gas makes the wind pressure causes its movement. hugs
Date: 11/25/2014 5:49:00 AM
Hi Shadow, Loved this piece on the wind. Great write. And beautifully chosen words. Best wishes Kevin
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Date: 11/25/2014 3:57:00 PM
ty Kevin glad you enjoyed it hugs

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