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Winds of Change

Floor of pine needles. Centuries of concealing. Wind reveals secrets!

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David Byrne

Date: 12/20/2009 5:26:00 PM

I really like this....................well done!

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/10/2009 5:55:00 AM

Beautiful haiku, and I love the image it conjures. One of my favorite things to do as a child was to walk on pine needle strewn forest pathways. Still love to do that, although I no longer have the freedom to spend hours at it. ~Juliane

Date: 12/4/2009 12:37:00 PM

Good use of imagery for a interesting perspective. Gives the reader something to think about. I really like the last line. Keep on writing! Karen

Richard Pickett

Date: 12/4/2009 4:43:00 AM

Secrets hmmmm... Nice piece here.. I like Haiku's well done... RdP

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/1/2009 4:53:00 PM

Thought-provoking Haiku, Marty! This is picture-perfect! Great job! Peace and love, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/1/2009 11:50:00 AM

Wishing you a week blessed with love and inspiration Marty. I am thanking you for posting your excellent poetry which I have enjoyed reading today. Love, Carol

Richard Pickett

Date: 12/1/2009 3:41:00 AM

Nicely done, good flow and content. RdP