Winds Carry Me

Carry me home The wind through the trees has a name Carry me home Never more will I dare to roam Beauty and pain are not the same Destiny's path, I shall not blame Carry me home Winds carry me sweep me across the deepest sky Winds carry me In a hushed voice, a loving plea Gentle breezes embrace on high Heaven speaks on a whisper nigh Winds carry me *a rondelet Honorable Mention in No 174 Any Form Any Theme (Brian Strand)

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/31/2012 6:43:00 AM

I have not been on the soup for almost a week to read and comment. I have enjoyed being able to read your poetry this morning. I wanted to stop by to thank you for the comments you made during my absence from the soup. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment Rhonda. Love, Carol"

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2012 9:32:00 PM

Beautiful, Rhonda!! Way to rondelet!! Congrats in Brian's contest.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/5/2012 12:00:00 AM

just lovely images, rhonda.. congrats on your fine win!.:) huggs!

Kash Poet

Date: 5/4/2012 11:21:00 AM

Beautiful poem by you Rhonda.Congrats on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/4/2012 7:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in "Contest 174" Rhonda. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2012 11:15:00 PM

wow, this is a beauty!! Was it for any special contest? What an inspired write. This is how I like to see a religious or spiritual poem written, with such artistry!

Charles Henderson

Date: 4/16/2012 9:05:00 PM

Very nice presentation of this poem Barbara. I like it.