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yellow daffodils, a bee visits each flower - - raindrops on the glass written 4th March for Constance's Nature haiku contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2022 4:29:00 PM

how did I miss this one. It's so nice, jack. BIG congrats.

Constance La France

Date: 3/8/2022 8:25:00 AM

Jack, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku contest with your wonderful poem ~Constance

Paul Callus

Date: 3/7/2022 6:59:00 AM

That's a lovely image which you paint, Jack. Probably a passing April shower is watering your flowers! Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/5/2022 3:27:00 PM

Hello Jack, I can picture this scene. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/5/2022 7:12:00 AM

Lovely spring scene depicted here, Jack. Janice

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 3/4/2022 6:09:00 PM

Very nice

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2022 8:42:00 AM

Ahhh!! I hope the bees got some honey before the rain drove them to a dry spot. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Deb M

Date: 3/4/2022 7:29:00 AM

Hey Jack..A simply lovely sweet poem. Debx