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Window of Moments Past

Every day I find myself looking through my window Like a pathway into my whole life I can see every sweep, every hogwash moment Now I am like the final viewer All these years I have been growing up not know of now Until now, which came to swiftly Moments of the past; of the future all coincide with these young thoughts which so abruptly stop my mind Life, which was once a gift to me Once again posses me to be it's humble prisoner and again I see that this is all it can be

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/9/2014 7:18:00 AM
heartfelt, Mary, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/9/2014 4:12:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Mary ! - - Our memory is an important part of life - well written ! - Pleased to read your first poem. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/8/2014 10:19:00 PM
Mary, deeply expressed in a way I can relate to. . A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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