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WINDOW

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WINDOW

WINDOW

window to the soul
may not be done with mirror
choose some quiet place
eyes closed    body relaxed
you looking at you    just light

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  1. Date: 7/28/2011 9:32:00 PM
    I think it's called reflection. Nice verse to think about.

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 11:12:00 AM
    This is such a soothing read, Dave- I think I need to do this-- thank you for the reminder here and also thank you for dropping by my poems :) you are sweet to do so :) and yes I believe in angels too-- I had such a vivid dream from before I am almost sure it was real... hugs and enjoy your weekend :D

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 6:22:00 PM
    Yes... It takes the insight to see oneself......clearly enough to recognize the image we thought we knew.

  1. Date: 6/20/2011 6:10:00 AM
    A great piece to focus on when meditating sir ! Awesome job dear poet ! Have a spectacular week my friend ! Much love, james

  1. Date: 6/19/2011 10:57:00 AM
    Profound, Daver. We see only our bodies in the mirror. Only through introspection do we see the person inside. Awesome poem! Love you, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/19/2011 6:29:00 AM
    This is a beauty, Daver! Oh, I'm so finding it difficult to find that "quiet place". Every time I think I've found it, something comes along and rattles the window. Strange, it had always been open before. A most inspirational man, are you! Happy Father's Day, to a wise and influential man! Best to you and yours!! Love, Mikki

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    Date: 6/20/2011 10:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Do the above and use a mantra - OHM, sung softly over and over works like a charm. I use HU. Love, daver
  1. Date: 6/19/2011 5:16:00 AM
    Inspiration has filled the pages of poetry over this weekend here at PoetrySoup. I am happy to have been able to read your poetry here today Daver. Have a wonderful Sunday I will be back soon to read more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/19/2011 2:07:00 AM
    Beuatiful, Dave. I haven't been writing much poetry lately - back to writing my novel 'A Journey of Roses and Thorns'. Just dropping in to say hello to you my dear friend. Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 6/18/2011 6:22:00 PM
    wow, a great piece on the benefits of mediation, Daver. VERY good writing from you today!!!

  1. Date: 6/18/2011 4:04:00 PM
    a great piece of fine poetry.

  1. Date: 6/18/2011 3:25:00 PM
    Beautiful, simply so beautiful. Love it

  1. Date: 6/18/2011 12:18:00 PM
    breathless, daver; period! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 6/18/2011 11:27:00 AM
    Fine and keen observation of the self-introspective thoughts with humor, daver

  1. Date: 6/18/2011 11:07:00 AM
    Fine poetry my friend....Michael