Window

Luminous clouds pass By my window Above the traffics din. In between my Staring eyes begin- Look out that window Frame the day, transport Your thoughts elsewhere Consider every puff of Cloud and glide with Mindless care!

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/18/2010 10:35:00 AM

A great recipe for stress relief, I agree. I am enjoying your poems today. Aloha, Connie

Lynette Chachere

Date: 8/11/2010 4:27:00 PM

this is a nice write.live life with a care, just gliding through. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 8/11/2010 12:28:00 PM

Yes, at times we just want to forget everything, all our cares and snares and glide above. Very nice write! Love the image.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/11/2010 9:59:00 AM

What wonderful poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I have not read a bad poem yet today. I am enjoying reading each and everyone from old poets and new poets alike. Lots of amazing contest entries also. Thank you for sharing yours with us today David. Love, Carol

Anthony Nutter

Date: 8/11/2010 3:36:00 AM

Drifting along with the clouds after this vivid and excellent write. Nice piece.

John Rhinem

Date: 8/11/2010 2:25:00 AM

Ps. Smile ~ I am going to fave this gem here "Dear David," because its just that good ~ "Bye Again!":) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 8/11/2010 2:20:00 AM

Smile ~ I love this dear friend; spoken within such a soft and caring it seems tone; and laced amid wisdom I find....Smile, I love poems such as this and, I love the poets whom write them ~ "Wonderful Thoughts & Images &, A Beautiful Verse!!!" ~ "Much Love & Warmth Always, to You & Your Loves," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Beautiful Day My Friend, Through The Loves Panes Window of Your Beautiful Soul;" Bye!:) ~