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On the rise of a hill overlooking the bend, where the old gravel road seems to narrow and blend, stands the bony old legs made of timber and nail With regal restraint, neither praise or complaint, it's remained in it's place like a candle on cake It begs no attention, but for birds and the rain.. When a farm bit the dust, the windmill was left. It is squeaking a bit, from some rust, and neglect as is clings to a time that no longer exists. Memories spin with each shift in the wind. The years have abused you... No longer called useful? I beg to reply...I think you are beautiful Strong beams held you strong Your day's work was done When the wind caught your breath and death came with the drought. And Doubt found a home... Now the birds sing their poems on the wings of your brow. Pride came from the hands that came to erect Hammered a nail with a faith's dedication Placing each board, with fresh hope and conviction A wheel, standing regal, a workhorse with fervor bringing new life, from the depths of a river The years have abused you... No longer called useful? I beg to reply...I think you are graceful Once so essential I'd call you beautiful
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Date: 8/26/2018 12:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I like the flow and phrasing of this. The repetitive lines are brilliant. Enjoyed.
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Date: 8/23/2018 3:16:00 AM
Congratulations, Carrie on your win with such a lovely flowing verse.
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Date: 8/22/2018 9:12:00 PM
Wow Carrie. Lovely - a beautiful poem. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 5/4/2018 6:11:00 AM
You brought the windmill to life Carrie...with all of is history...so touching...truly beautiful! Sincerely, Elaine
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Date: 5/1/2018 5:46:00 PM
You have made the old windmill sound so beautiful and despite its dilapidated state and it's not used for its original purpose it still stands tall and is still useful:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/1/2018 5:40:00 PM
Your awesome poem took me right back to my great grand parents homestead in Nekoma Kansas. A little one horse farming town where memories still whisper from the aging windmill I last witnessed when I visited the birth home of my mother. It was sad to see the place so rundown when it had been once so grand. You brought these feelings to the surface in your wonderful poem Carrie. No one can quite manage to match your magistry when writing of days long past. I loved this piece Carrie! Hope it wins!
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