Windmill

Slowly turns windmill By the gentle wind, grass grows Eaten by the cows

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James Fraser

Date: 12/18/2009 12:56:00 PM

Nice Haiku Sara, keep writing James

Danny Nunn

Date: 12/17/2009 7:36:00 PM

Nice write, I have worked on many of them..Thanks on The Old Soldier..I wrote that about my Dad...he was wounded in WWII in Europe..until the day he died at 65, he still had those nightmare. MERRY CHRISTMAS...Danny

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/15/2009 11:38:00 AM

Reminds me of a scenery in Wisconsin. Beautiful picture! Peace and love, Audrey

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/15/2009 10:42:00 AM

Such a nice peaceful scene. Beautiful haiku! ~Juliane

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/15/2009 9:35:00 AM

Thank you for this excellent poem you shared with us today Sara. Love, Carol

Constance La France

Date: 12/15/2009 9:20:00 AM

You painted a lovely picture with words..

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/15/2009 7:30:00 AM

I love this ... it seems such a rustic image, and yet the world yearns for this again as a green energy solution.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/15/2009 5:17:00 AM

Beautiful beginning to my busy day.. I can always count on one of your poems to see the beauty in nature and God... blessings.. luv... Linda-Marie...