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You wind along, jutting in and out: sneaking under leafy limbs, you pace, slithering past grasslands there about, like a shiny snake with stealth and grace. Further down you creep past rolling hills, lawns so green with homes and lovely view. Silver ripples mirror sun that thrills eyes of those above that follow you. Time idles by as you move along, creeping with your never-ending flow. Mysteries hide deep, to you belong, as you glide past here from long ago. December 10, 2016 ~8th Place~ Contest: River Line Sponsor: Rick Parise Judged: 02/19/2016

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Date: 2/21/2017 10:23:00 AM
I love this line ''mysteries deep to you belong.'' Great entry. Should have placed higher but that is opinion again. Congrats to you on a nice piece of work.
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Date: 2/20/2017 5:25:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery Sandra congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/19/2017 8:44:00 PM
A slithering success! Congrats, Sandra!
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Date: 2/19/2017 8:44:00 PM
Lovely imagery in your river poem, dear Sandra. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 12/12/2016 7:31:00 PM
Love the way you described the flow and it surroundings, Sandra, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/7/2016 5:19:00 PM
Lovely poetry, Mrs Sandra. A smooth ride:)
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Date: 12/7/2016 12:38:00 PM
Great river poem Sandra x
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/7/2016 4:48:00 PM
Thank you very much, Wendy! Hugs, Sandra

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