Winding Path

winding path tumbling onward of stone I walk in silence

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David Williams

Date: 12/18/2011 12:06:00 PM

Rick congrats on your win and good luck with your goal..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/18/2011 10:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Resolution Haiku" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/17/2011 11:21:00 PM

wow, that last line was superb! Awesome way to do a haiku of it! congrats on your win.

Tracy Edwards

Date: 12/17/2011 6:21:00 AM

Congrats for your 4th place in my contest Rick..Wishing you such rewarding times as you walk with God xxx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/12/2011 12:56:00 PM

Poetry at its finest, Rick. It makes us "feel" as well as "think." Best wishes in Tracie's contest! Love, Carolyn

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/12/2011 11:43:00 AM

Rick...let me get my giggles out first...your big Eye BALL made me think of Monster's Inc...love that cartoon!...Your haiku shows how important your prayer and fellowship time are...fabulous idea for a resolution...good luck in the contest....Gwendolen

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/12/2011 10:49:00 AM

excellent Haiku, i find many aspects here in this poem, Rick. harry