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Winding Map To My Anger

The sphere of influence influenced me spherically With no core Left brained hemisphere confused Like right handed athlete Co-ordination on my medulla-oblongata Peripheral nervous system shuttered down As cranial nerves refused to send impulses Failure to interpretation on my cerebrum Lead to my confusion. Response

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Melisa Moyo

Date: 9/27/2016 9:08:00 AM

not for the weak minded. i like it.

Space Cadet

Date: 9/26/2016 11:26:00 PM

You're tapping into something here...Whenever I think of my central nervous system, I think of some sort of malformation, and the medulla-oblongata, just that scientific term itself, is there for breathing or that is controlled by the lungs. I enjoy this because there is so much to add. Thank you for sharing...W down As cranial ne

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Date: 7/27/2016 10:01:00 PM

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