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Wind That Scuttle

It's the wind that scuttle Had it not left me troubled? Bewildered and peculiar am I The strange looks of the sky Rains by as the day sleeps the night And welkin seems It broke down a frail sigh Thus, emitted a shrill cry Shuns the daylight as clouds gather Entwined with poetic strife As lovely clouds converge to safeguard I have thought... When the wind come hitherto from afar Only shall it present ...more mellow mars Suddenly fallen have I ...the prolific wind scuttles It's the wind that scuttle Had it, left me yet troubled? Bewildered and peculiar am I... Nevertheless... Eyes of tomorrow shall come to pass And mind of sorrow fall short at last I want to make much...of my soul However...the wind which tarry hitherto stows me much troubles In which I composed a frail sigh from And even I...I emit a shrill cry, with a voice, saying... "Goodbye. That I may change direction from mellow mars." And now...brother and sisters. Behold...now I am free.

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Date: 11/25/2011 7:28:00 PM
There is a lot of depth in this poem, leaving the reader with something to ponder. Wishing you the best with your writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 8/11/2009 2:13:00 PM
Very thoughtful and provacative! Light & Love and welcome to the Soup!
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Davin Math
Date: 11/24/2011 12:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, and sorry for the late response.
Date: 8/11/2009 11:31:00 AM
Good afternoon Davin. I just finished entering some of the contests going on here at the Soup. Now I am going to read some of the poems written here. Thank you for sharing yours. Look through the contests maybe you might want to enter some of them also if you haven't already. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/24/2011 12:25:00 AM
Thanks Carol, I will definitely look into some, please forgive me for being late on this reply.
Date: 8/11/2009 4:45:00 AM
Interesting. Sara
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Davin Math
Date: 11/24/2011 12:23:00 AM
Thank you, haha, sorry for the very late response.

Book: Shattered Sighs