Wind Swept

Wind swept on the moor I stood; my soul far away Flowing with the clouds Date: 7.8.2014

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 11/22/2014 5:44:00 PM

Now tweeting the top 3. May my meagre influence on twitter win you many more reads.

John Lawless

Date: 11/16/2014 5:19:00 PM

It has been said that "Brevity is the soul of wit" and here you have mastered it.

Hija De La Luna

Date: 11/10/2014 3:08:00 AM

yes, i could visualize this imagery and relate how the soul go flowing with the clouds. love this! Congratulations, Mohan!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/9/2014 7:20:00 PM

Kool Ku! Congratulations on your top of the list win.

Mark Trichet

Date: 11/9/2014 4:41:00 PM

Well done Mohan, congratulations.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/9/2014 4:05:00 PM

beautifully penned many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 11/7/2014 11:09:00 PM

I've finally judged the "Solitude" poetry competition. Now while I wait for Soup to post the winners, so that I can announce them in a Blog, I'm catching up and letting some poets know how they went. This haiku took me to the heavens. I found in this piece the enormity that had inspired the competition. So I'd like to take this opportunity to tell you that "Wind Swept", swept into second position. Well done.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 11/8/2014 12:50:00 AM

Scott, thanks for the long awaited results, my placement in your contest, liking it so much, and your kind words. Mohan

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/7/2014 7:47:00 AM

That is a beautiful image my friend. It makes me want to rest on a cloud.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 8/9/2014 9:28:00 AM

Thanks Casarah for your visit and like. Mohan