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Wind Song

Here I stand as cool as the wind, heavenly rain drops, my lord showers me with his mist. hail proceeds, mother natures nurturing hand turns to a fist. Nearby, an aspen, short and bulky sways with her current, dancing to a wind song. A dramatic sequence occurs, raindrops beat the pavement acting as drums. Wind songs sound of tambourine and the aspen sings her melody, each leaf its own entity. All with a different tone, She smells like lilac perfume.... Is she a she? Or is she a he? A natural figure, a figment of ones own preference. Mother nature represents the world . From the cirrus and strattus clouds, to a picture perfect sunset. Mountains that span high into a distant horizon, or the weeping willow whose inspirational position gives beauty its definition.... .....2009.....JP

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Date: 11/22/2010 11:33:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 11/22/2010 11:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jared. Love,Carol
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Date: 11/21/2010 5:35:00 PM
Congrats Jared on your featured poem this week on the Soup luv.. a great choice and read to share with us all.. wishing u and your family a very Happy Thanksgiving with lots of luv darlin' ..from the New Jersey crew ...
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Date: 7/12/2009 7:23:00 AM
Lovely write Jared, you have a kool descriptive word range>>James
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Date: 7/10/2009 12:09:00 AM
Great use of imagery...Raul
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Date: 7/9/2009 4:16:00 AM
Good rain poem. Sara
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Date: 7/9/2009 1:56:00 AM
great presentation bro. like the sounds. clingingg silently!
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