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**From my collection of poems: 'Apollo's Diary' I wonder if she thinks of me, at night, alone..... in her melting-bed; With moon full as her curiousity ....my breath, the wind in the late hour the stars I shall tease with, and phallic-lavender to ignite her bosom; I am all things gentle, yet mighty, soft as her silk sheets..... Dark and tall in her bedroom shadows, but candle-light makes me real with the night so young, if a king should come ---- he will not do..... She longs love, not adulterous power; I shall whisper upon a balmy breeze..... (I wonder if she thinks of me) at night..... By: Keith O.J. Hunt In Response, Thoughts of him enshroud me, at night, alone… . in my lonely bed; With the moon sharing her luminosity …I breathe his memory, in the late hour the stars do more than just align they collide into each other and orbit He is all things to me, he is that loving song that never leaves my mind Should he arrive at my doorstep, I’d open the sails of my heart for him I’d be a whisper for his soul, a balmy breeze…. his night… By Mystic Rose

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Date: 6/19/2015 3:09:00 PM
What a great romantic collaboration! You have a great rapport going on here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/23/2015 8:27:00 AM
You have a unique style that can't be topped Keith, and it flows well as evidenced by Vie's inspired connection with it.
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 5/23/2015 1:52:00 PM
Thanks Connie, very sweet of you to say! I don't know if I believe my style can't be topped, but it's reward enough to bring a little more light into the world! Keith:-)
Date: 5/23/2015 1:51:00 AM
now that is stunning. SKAT
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 5/23/2015 1:48:00 PM
Thanks SKAT, enjoy your weekend honey! Keith;-)
Date: 5/22/2015 8:22:00 PM
I read this on Vienna's page....so romantic Keith...love it Tim
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 5/23/2015 1:44:00 PM
Many thanks Tim! Enjoy your weekend brother! Keith:-)
Date: 5/22/2015 7:32:00 PM
Enjoyed poems, seems like a Romeo and Juliet poems, very romantic
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