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Wind Dances

the wind dances through the trees snap and crackles all the streets all the leaves withered around like the place of cricket ground the sound of it was zun - zun ! windows let the wind pass through

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Date: 3/17/2016 12:24:00 AM
asad mahmood, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/14/2016 9:56:00 PM
ASAD, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **
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Date: 6/13/2011 7:08:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Asad. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 6/12/2011 5:40:00 AM
Nice poetry my friend...Michael
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Asad Mahmood
Date: 6/16/2011 8:57:00 AM
thank you my friend!!!!!!!!!!!

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