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Elements Part II-Wind Sponsor: Brian Davey Brisk breeze beyond the bluster of the buzzes from bumblebees, great gusts gifted and granted toward the garden full of greaves. Coiling curves within curls created contingent upon the current, tangled and torrential twines taking the sea towards the turrent. High temperatures are hazardous while handling the blowing heat, weaving winds will wander with or without natures wreathe. Abducting air is absent while aligned after its zephyr ablazes, fire forgives fearlessly as the lightening frees the winds uneven frazes. ~This poem is a mix of Alliteration and Couplet~ ~Date Written: March 25, 2016~

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Date: 3/31/2016 2:00:00 AM
Very lyrical, Laura! Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 3/30/2016 1:11:00 AM
Wonderful poetry n win Laura.. big congrats!
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Date: 3/29/2016 10:30:00 PM
Lovely, Laura. Alliteration at its best. I enjoyed your piece. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 3/29/2016 12:45:00 PM
Nicely done, Laura. Congratulations on your placement in the 'wind' contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/29/2016 12:57:00 PM
thank you Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 3/29/2016 5:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my Elements: Wind Contest Laura! I also agree with Silent the last two lines were phenomenal
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Date: 3/29/2016 10:12:00 AM
Thank you very much Brian! :) glad you enjoyed it :)-luloo

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