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We see our sun and feel its heat, watch falling rain cascade; see brilliance of the winter snow, and fluffy clouds that shade. Elusive to our eyes is wind – a ghost, she moves around. She bends the branches of our trees and chases leaves on ground. We hear her bellow when she's fierce and swishing when she's tame. Like magic, she can lift a house in raging hurricane. She cools us in the summer heat, creates waves on the sea; a force that moves about our Earth, but all invisibly. Without a clue, wind comes and goes – intensity, her will; unseen but felt in many ways – caress, or ice cold chill. Where does she come from and then go, this force that has no shape? We feel and hear her awesome breath, until she plans escape. Elusive to our eyes is wind; a ghost, she moves around. Her energy we cannot see; the paths she leaves, profound. Sandra M. Haight ~3rd Place~ Contest: Wind Sponsor: Skat A Judged: 08/30/2015

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Date: 9/6/2015 10:00:00 PM
A wonderful write, Sandra, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/9/2015 2:23:00 PM
Thank you once again, Eve, for visiting my poem and leaving your comments and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/1/2015 12:53:00 AM
Congrats on ur eloquent winning write Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/2/2015 8:23:00 PM
Hi Dr. Upma, so nice of your to stop by with your nice comment! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/31/2015 10:36:00 AM
WOW - ,this is perfect wording, perfect rhyme - and just rads so well....you aer very good at writing!!!!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/2/2015 8:26:00 PM
Thank you again Genevieve, for your kind, supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 8/31/2015 8:58:00 AM
Beautiful, and philosophical; which I like!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/2/2015 8:27:00 PM
Thanks, Gerald! Your positive comment is much appreciated! Sandra
Date: 8/30/2015 11:05:00 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my WIND contest. SKAT LOVE
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/2/2015 8:28:00 PM
Thank you, Skat. It was a pleasure to participate in your contest. I appreciate the nice placement. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/28/2015 1:32:00 PM
ohh, this is superb and image-laden, sandra... mine pales in comparison to yours!.. so fine!.. huggs
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/2/2015 8:29:00 PM
Thank you, Nette. Your positive comment and support means a lot to me. Your poem was awesome, as I have commented before. Hugs, Sandra

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