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Wind

Trees bend low as fierce winds blow And leaves fly to and fro The storm is slowly passing through the mighty wind is howling too When the storm is over, my mind is put at ease The wind is now a gentle breeze As it whispers softly to the trees Its fury had now ceased A feather in the air now sails It journeys as the wind prevails Until it makes its slow descent Landing gently in the vale To the meadow the wind now goes Where daffodils and lilacs grow And there a flutter of butterflies Rise high in windy skies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/13/2017 10:49:00 AM
I enjoyed this. I also feel the mind at ease after the storm passes. I love the breeze too :) I like the meadow you brought into this poem!
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Date: 9/1/2015 12:55:00 AM
Congrats on your superb winning write Joseph!
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Date: 8/30/2015 11:05:00 PM
Joseph, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my WIND contest. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 8/29/2015 9:24:00 PM
The imagery, rhythm, and flow are so amazing in this wonderful write! Once the storm passes, I feel like drifting along with this adventurous wind to wherever it takes me. Beautiful piece! Good luck in the contest, my friend! Pandita
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Date: 8/28/2015 12:56:00 PM
Your poem falls within the category of whimsical, fanciful and imaginative; armed with an energy of its own that propels it into our sphere of reality. It allows time to lighten the mind and soul and just have some fun. Emile.
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Date: 8/27/2015 4:02:00 PM
ooohh, that last part was so cool. The flutter of butterflies rising into that windy sky. Awesome image!
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Date: 8/27/2015 11:25:00 AM
Such beautiful imagery I especially love the final stanza Joseph - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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