Wind

Wind, tornado, Whirlwind, tunnel vision Heightened senses

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Date: 3/27/2011 6:42:00 AM

Two in a row.

Date: 1/25/2010 9:21:00 AM

Loved this poem, stirs something in me, heightens and stretches my imagination..

Date: 1/21/2010 7:19:00 AM

very nice read--great job in mentioning so many wind forms in 3 lines :)

Date: 1/19/2010 4:55:00 PM

Good one, Doris. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments. Love, Lainie

Date: 1/18/2010 10:21:00 AM

Great haiku , Doris and thanks for your kind comments . Wind : lay off the backed beans ...

Date: 1/18/2010 9:41:00 AM

Like superwoman......:}.....:JP]

Date: 1/17/2010 9:51:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku...Enjoyed...Marty

Date: 1/17/2010 6:00:00 PM

Very well done Haiku, Doris...Especially the 'tunnel vision'...It BLEW me away! - Tim

Date: 1/17/2010 5:37:00 PM

great Haiku, Doris! Send it in to the weather channel! soup mail

Date: 1/17/2010 4:59:00 PM

Great Haiku that has a lot of hot air blowing around. Keep the creative pen flowing. Mom