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Wind

i can't possibly talk about the sun when i'm still in the shadow of the clouds who eclipse it i'm waiting for the wind to push them aside but i'll wait forever unless i become the invisible force that grants myself my own right to move the future out of the shadow of the past

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Date: 8/29/2019 9:16:00 PM
Brooklyn, this one was so metaphorically beautiful, I read it three times learning something sweeter with each read.
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Brooklyn Cruz
Date: 9/13/2019 10:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Caren <3

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