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Wilt of the Red Rose

Pain with time begins to fade leaving clarity in its wake patiently beginning to comprehend the heartache that wilted away with the twilight like the red rose on a frosty winters night In remembrance of the rain that once soothed a void, distracting thoughts of hopelessness that invoked death; yet I bend like the wilt of the red rose which must accept, that all beauty is sentenced understanding this; in time death will be unpleasant in time death will be present

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/30/2015 3:29:00 AM
grim and bittersweet. thanks for sharing. the last two lines are powerful...Victoria
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Date: 3/29/2015 9:35:00 AM
- A small greeting and warm welcome, Andre :) - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here at the P- Soup - Looking forward to read many poems from you in the future - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/28/2015 12:22:00 PM
Very nicely penned.
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Date: 3/27/2015 11:04:00 PM
Andre, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/27/2015 1:53:00 AM
Like it.
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