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Will You Marry Me

The Sun dupes me at dusk - my world turns grey - Leaving me alone with the distant stars... Will you marry me on Valentine's Day? Rivers have gone to meet the sea - at bay Rest - poured their love in the shallow of marsh The Sun dupes me at dusk - my world turns grey Cuckoos are busy in nuptial play Rest are singing along with the guitars Will you marry me on Valentine's Day? Your long absence makes my faint heart to fray Following your footsteps up to the Mars The Sun dupes me at dusk - my world turns grey The Spring is bringing colours to display Spreading merry through the strings of sitars Will you marry me on Valentine's Day? Please don’t let the time – once more – slips away Give me fair chance to heal my endless scars The Sun dupes me at dusk - my world turns grey Will you marry me on Valentine's Day? 01.02.16

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Date: 2/25/2016 11:18:00 AM
A superb write, Bobby! Congrats!
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/25/2016 8:07:00 PM
Thank you Balveen. Warm regards, Bobby
Date: 2/25/2016 10:09:00 AM
Valentine Villanelles almost sweet as apple jelly now read on winners’ page..You are quite the sage..Sweet Congrats..Sara
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/25/2016 8:06:00 PM
Thanks a lot Sara for your sweet comments. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 2/23/2016 9:59:00 PM
Wow a lovely poem Anindya.. no wonder a great win.. big congrats!
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/25/2016 8:04:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Sharma. Warm regards, Bobby
Date: 2/23/2016 9:19:00 PM
:) PD
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Date: 2/23/2016 4:11:00 PM
Once again, Bobby, Congratulations on your "Valentine's Villanelle Challenge" have a nice day. ~LINDA~
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/23/2016 9:06:00 PM
XOXO, Bobby
Date: 2/16/2016 12:56:00 PM
Bobby, Congrats on your nice win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/23/2016 9:06:00 PM
Thanks a lot Linda. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 2/16/2016 1:51:00 AM
Wonderful write Anindya n so is the win.. big congrats!
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/16/2016 5:57:00 AM
So nice of Dr.Sharma. Warm regards, Bobby
Date: 2/14/2016 8:12:00 PM
Well done! Congratulations on your win.
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/14/2016 10:56:00 PM
Thanks a lot Susan. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 2/14/2016 8:06:00 PM
Hi Anindya, Congratulations on your placement in Nayda's contest my friend. I enjoyed the read.
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/14/2016 10:58:00 PM
Thank you very much, Vladislav. Warm regards, Bobby
Date: 2/14/2016 3:21:00 PM
Happy Valentines Day my dear friend :) Love your beautiful poem, congratulations on your win !!!!!!
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/14/2016 11:04:00 PM
Happy Valentines Day, Eve. So nice of you. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 2/14/2016 1:23:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Bobby:-) hugs jan xx
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/14/2016 1:58:00 PM
Thsnks Jan. XOXO,Bobby
Date: 2/14/2016 12:02:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Anindya
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/14/2016 1:52:00 PM
Thanks a lot Nayda. My pleasure to participate in your contest. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 2/14/2016 11:57:00 AM
Anindya, congrats on your placement in the contest! *Smiles* -luloo
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/14/2016 1:48:00 PM
Hi Luloo! Thanks & hugs, Bobby
Date: 2/6/2016 1:18:00 PM
Anytime
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Date: 2/6/2016 10:34:00 AM
Bobby, Congratulations on your "VALENTINE POEM OF YOUR CHOICE win!!!" LINDA
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/6/2016 1:16:00 PM
Thanks a lot Linda. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 2/2/2016 10:49:00 PM
Anundya,, Congratulations on your Valentine win. Love **SKAT**
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/3/2016 9:57:00 PM
Thank you, SKAT. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 2/2/2016 5:53:00 PM
A delightful villanelle Bobby many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/2/2016 9:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 2/2/2016 5:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/2/2016 9:53:00 PM
Hi Susan! Thanks once again. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 2/2/2016 5:21:00 PM
Anindya, congrats on your placement in the contest *Smiles* -luloo
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/2/2016 9:50:00 PM
Thanks a lot Laura. Warm regards, Bobby
Date: 2/1/2016 2:40:00 AM
Lovely! Enjoyed reading this.
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/1/2016 3:54:00 AM
Thank you Susan. For a few days I am trying to write rhymes. This is my first Villanelle. Happy to know that you liked it. Warm regards, Bobby

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