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Will You Marry Me

I love the way you look when you are happy; your teeth glowing in the moonlight, and your laughter cheering up everything I know. I love the way you smile; it is the sweetest thing I have ever seen under the Sun. I love the way you look at me; they have a way of inviting attention without any speech. I love the way you hold a child; it is as though it is your own. I love the way you shed tears as you watch a soap opera; I console you with a cuddling touch, reminding you it's just a play, and reminding myself that I have a woman who can feel, at the core of her soul. I love the way you act when you are mad at me; pushing me against the wall, and holding my shirt as though you want to tear it; making me feel like making love to you. You are all I want in a wife; everything I prayed for! Will you marry me?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/1/2014 8:14:00 AM
Congrat, Teddy on your well deserved win, :-) Sarpong
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/1/2014 11:23:00 PM
Thank you for applauding me Sarpong! :-)
Date: 9/28/2014 7:02:00 AM
- Teddy, congrats with your winning poem - A superb 2nd place !!! - Enjoying reading your poem - Have a lovely Sunday - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/29/2014 6:03:00 AM
Thank you for your kind applause Anne Lise! I really enjoyed my Sunday! Have a lovely week!! ^_^ <3
Date: 9/28/2014 5:50:00 AM
Nice romantic take on the theme, congrats on the win, Teddy
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/29/2014 6:01:00 AM
Thank you very much Dr. Ram Mehta! :-)
Date: 9/27/2014 11:19:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/29/2014 6:00:00 AM
Welcome Judy! I really enjoyed the contest, and the rest of the winning poems! ^_^

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