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Will You Marry Me

I asked for your love Your answer turned into a spear and pierced my heart and wounded my heart Paralysed now are my emotions which once wandered freely with my dreams to enter your territory with love songs your "no" to my plea was okay with me It was a firm foundation on which to build my hope So soul-sickening you said further "I can never love you"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/28/2014 6:15:00 AM
- Sarpong, congrats with your winning poem - Enjoy reading it - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Sarpong Kumankoma
Date: 10/2/2014 5:51:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise
Date: 9/28/2014 6:04:00 AM
Dropping back to congratulate you on the win, Sarpong
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Sarpong Kumankoma
Date: 10/2/2014 5:52:00 AM
Thanks Dr Mehta
Date: 9/27/2014 11:23:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest!
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Sarpong Kumankoma
Date: 10/2/2014 5:56:00 AM
Thanks for your contest too.
Date: 9/27/2014 8:45:00 AM
oh a rejected proposal - so sad and a unique take on the theme - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Sarpong Kumankoma
Date: 10/2/2014 5:57:00 AM
Thanks Jan :)
Date: 9/22/2014 9:01:00 AM
Nice take of on the theme of love that hurts or is lost, Sarpong
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Sarpong Kumankoma
Date: 9/23/2014 4:29:00 AM
Thanks Dr Mehta... :) your inspire me a lot. I'm always grateful
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Sarpong Kumankoma
Date: 9/23/2014 4:29:00 AM
Thanks Dr Mehta... :) you inspire me a lot. I'm always grateful

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