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Will You Marry Me

Will you marry me On Dec 23 ,1979 At Ridgway hospital. I said to her. You took my heart to a place it's never been. You let me have that first kiss and it never end Waited a little longer till the day was to end. We lost a loved one that night, but I gained my only love. When I asked you to marry me. You took me by surprise. Now 35 years later if I had to ask you a question It would you marry me again.

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Date: 9/30/2014 12:52:00 PM
Sweet poem Harold. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 9/28/2014 6:53:00 AM
- Harold, congrats with your winning poem - A wonderful 1st place !!! - Enjoy reading it - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/28/2014 5:39:00 AM
Nice take on the theme of the contest, congrats on the win, Harold
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Date: 9/27/2014 11:10:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest!
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Date: 9/27/2014 8:26:00 AM
very romantic but also tinged with sadness. many congrats on your fine win :-) hugs jan xx
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